Hehehe... I hope you really do this. It'd be awesome if I saw someone do this in this narrow-minded world, it would make my day.
Art is great, the animation of it is a bit repetitive, but it works for this particular movie.
Thank you, I need to continue to practice animation! :P
24 hours to watch the whole thing is kinda long but it sure was worth it!
1) Regarding the looks:
Try having some shading in your animation to, you obviously know how to, hence the garbage can at the end. I don't like the rough lining, it makes your draws look a lot worse then they are. Using another drawing tool is an easy fix.
2) Regarding the rest:
You say this is practice so you propably know this isn't to funny or interesting. I hope seeing something good from you soon, I'm sure you have the potential.
Thanks plenty for the feedback. I appreciate it.
I'll try and practice on the lines as those are extremely hard to work on at times. As for the shading, I was kinda rushing to get this done on time, but I'll try later to get things properly shaded.
Ahahaha... as long as you have fun keep it up. Nah, but seriously, I don't think NG allows filmed stuff, animations only if I'm not mistaken.
CANNOT... STOP.... FAVORITING... YOUR... VIDEOS...
Nah, but seriously, I'm not into animations but I consider myself a codemonkey with potential. A game developer, a fancy man would say. The quality of the games I produce are eh... mediocre at best. There are shortcuts in game development as well, just like you're describing there is in animaton. Still I wouldn't go for them. They're a limit on creativity and just to easy... causing a flood of the same type of content at the cost of views for those spending time to make the real thing.
I get the point of all peeps here saying they don't wanne pay for flash though. Well if you don't wanne pay for adobe flash and you wanne keep it legal then yeah... you should propably go for an alternative. Wanne keep it legal... just repeating a part of the sentence I just typed. Woops... that repeating was totally by accident.
Don't be sorry you made this. It was kinda funny :)
Thanks for commenting :)
It's pretty bad but still better then some peeps 10th animation.
Yeah I'm just gonne do my review right here.
-The English is bad, the text should be rewritten, let someone help you
-Text is to fast now and then, a somewhat dramatic voice reading it would benefit this video to (if done right)
-at 00:54, the top left corner of America was flooded?
-The blue dot is a bit akward on a map with 50 shades of grey.
2 stars, it's not a bad game intro, but a pretty bad standalone video.
Thank for the feedback.
Very different. Really entertaining!
you can daggietain me anyday
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